Hello everyone! Okay, I have found the original version of the 1st poem and if I do say so myself, this one is far better. What do you think??? Leave your opinion.
Here one day...
Gone the next.
Called his phone...
Sent the text.
Worried I am,
Sit and wait,
For his presence at the gate.
Longing eyes search around
For a laugh, a voice, a sound.
This morning I thought all would be okay
Because I would see him today.
But because I have my friends with me,
I will focus, the path I'll see.
Much Love,
MNT
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Whadda you think, doc? C'mon I know I'm not the only opinionated one out there;). In any case, thanks so much for reading. And don't be scared too click the lovely little 'Follow' Button!